Friday, October 31, 2014

Fan Fiction based on "Cathy Come Home" by Leon Rakete

Fan Fiction based on “Cathy Come Home” Directed by Loach, K. (1969)
‘Tainted skin in a tainted system’
By Leon Rakete


“She’s stirring up trouble” barked Betty the Lodge maitre de. “How dare she accuse our Lodge of being unsanitary, saying it’s making her children sick,” Betty was fierce with anger. It took Mr Wordswood the manager of Newton Lodge in Southwark several minutes to calm Betty down. She seemed to be almost out of breath as she stood in his office, face red with tightened hands. “There there Mrs  Somers, I know you and your staff work very hard for our residence, providing them with the best of care,” Wordswood’s words seemed to dissolve in the dusty office air, even his attempt to place his left arm around Betty’s shoulders to indicate a sense of sincerity was rejected. She pushed his arm away saying, “I’ve had enough Bob, I really mean it this time, she’s so ungrateful, after all we’ve done for her and her pesty little hood rats.”

That morning Cathy had approached one of the Lodge’s staff in the corridor shortly after the breakfast duties were finished. They had run out of soap, she had previously requested new bars over a week ago but nothing had been done yet. “Do you expect us to keep washing our filth off in just hot water? And what about our clothes? You know we use that soap to wash our clothes as well,” she said with a sharp tone. Cathy had never really spoken to the staff like this before, you usually wouldn’t get a beep out of her, but she was tired of being treated like a slum citizen, being looked down on and frowned upon as social failure, like it was completely her fault, as if though she wanted to be crammed into these small lodgings and dependant on welfare.

“Mrs Somers please leave it with me” Wordswood said, “don’t let yourself get twisted in a knot over these people its not worth it. Any way we’ve just had a new resident arrive that you can orientate.” Wordswood ushered Betty towards the reception room where Mrs Sima Shah was waiting with her baby. A small thin Indian woman sat quietly gently rocking a caramel coloured baby boy. Her skin had a rich coffee tint, she wore a tattered blue dress, heavy woollen socks and dated shoes, everything about her seemed a little out of place, beside her was a big black rubbish bag full of belongings.“Mrs Shah is it?” spoke Wordswood, “Yes” she replied, gesturing her to come forward, Wordswood with a smirk on his face said, “Please come in, don’t be shy dear you’ve come to the write place, we’ll look after you.”

This place had changed Cathy, not having Reg around and barely hearing from him had made her feel isolated and vulnerable, in reply she had become a little hardened. Gone were the memories of their nice warm flat in Chelsea, she had felt the walls of this place move in on her, and though everything in her had sworn she was not going to be her parents her life was inevitably mirroring theirs.  As a child Cathy recalled how her family moved frequently, in fact It seemed to be a generational cycle. Her parents spoke of how they had moved from central London after Cathy’s Grandparents home was destroyed in the London bombings during the war, first to the west and then out south London as new housing settlements popped up. They struggle to find work and were unsuccessful at getting back on their feet, so they never really settled for very long. Now Cathy struggled with the thought that perhaps she was the biggest failure of them all.

This place wasn’t just changing Cathy but she had noticed a change in the other residents, they would come in optimistic even hopeful, but it wouldn’t be too long before the sparkle would diminish, talks of the future would die down and cynicism would settle in. Cathy in particular had noticed Sima one of the immigrant residence starting to isolate herself. On the whole the ladies generally didn’t mix much with her kind, some of the ladies regarded them as ‘poachers’ and blamed them for the housing shortage. Rumours had surfaced about a staff member harassing one of the immigrant residences but due to their second-class status in this place none of the ladies cared much.

It wasn’t till Cathy herself came across Sima in the communal bathrooms lying prostrate on the floor in tears, Sima’s English was poor but Cathy didn’t need to understand her language to know something was wrong, she helped her up and back into her dorm asking her all the way what happened? All Sima would utter was “Please no say…my baby…no where else to go.” Cathy helped her settle into bed. Returning to her room feeling agitated and disturbed by what she saw, Cathy cried herself to sleep that night.

Cathy woke the next day to discover the ladies talking about an Indian woman who had being evicted in the early hours of the morning. She rushed to Sima’s room to discover it empty. In the corridor outside the ladies were saying Wordswood had accused her of accommodating her husband in the night and kicked her out first light. “Rubbish!” Cathy blurted out, this was the last straw, she ran down to Wordswood’s office bowling right past the receptionist, cracking his door open and slamming shut behind her. 

She tried to hold her composure but with tears running down her face Cathy looked Wordswood dead in the face and said “You! It was you.” “Now, now Cathy” Wordswood replied, “We don’t want any more trouble here today.” Seemingly unshaken by Cathy’s accusation Wordswood rose from his desk to stand tall over her, “You know the Lodges protocol on marital arrangements, residence know full well our policies when deciding on coming to our residence, they agree to them by accepting our offer of placement, Sima forced my hand by refusing to abide by these conditions.”

Cathy couldn’t believe what she was hearing, these people were supposed to be helping them not taking advantage of them.  Starring straight past Wordswood façade of false humility and propriety and ignoring his egotistical stance Cathy reciprocated, “You preyed on her like a wild beast, exploiting her vulnerability, she trusted you and you betrayed her,” pausing for a minute to consider the implications of what Cathy knew could proceed next if she continued down this path, she realized if Wordswood could get rid of Sima he could easly get rid of her and her two little ones but it wasn’t right. Considering how the welfare system wasn’t just failing them but leveraging off them, an indignation rose inside of Cathy, with fear and trembling she looked Wordswood straight in the eye and said “I’m not going to let you get away with this.”

Fan Fiction Commentary

With all reality TV there is a blur between what is fact and what is fiction, and though by nature a fan fiction is purely a fictional retelling or an addition to an existing canon, I wanted there to still be an element of truth to this piece to show it still sat in the Reality TV genre. Therefore I spent some time looking over reviews of “Cathy Come Home,”particuarly reading about what the writers and producers were trying to achieve with the story, how they weaved fact and fiction together to communicate a strong message, and the social awareness agenda they had with the piece.

One review of the film comments on Loach’s reflection saying, “he realised the drama raised a social issue in the context of personal tragedy  but failed to outline the political causes…” As I looked further in to the debate of what caused the housing shortage many fingers pointed towards the Rachman administration of 1960. Rachman symbolized exploitory landlordism and the liberalization of rent control. Further research revealed London housing in the early 30’s and 40’s suffered greatly because demand was high from the bombing of houses in world war 1 and the shortage of materials to rebuild. There was also a push to relocate and establish housing outside of central London, which came to be known as the ‘London Overspill.’ These new settlements quickly resulted in what was recognized as the ‘London Overspill Slums,’ caused by rapid unrbanisation and population growth, creating over crowding and unhealthy living conditions. Alongside this large-scale immigration from Western India caused significant racial tension. I wanted to capture some of these contributing factors and bring awareness to them in my fanfiction.

I decided to create a hero archetype in the Cathy character, I felt the original film left her quite powerless but in my opinion she was a strong character and I wanted that to come through some how. I decided to establish a Antagonist in the character Wordswood who my Hero (Cathy) would eventually have a face off with at some stage.  I wasn’t too sure why or how this was going to occur but eventually I decided to use the racial tension happening at the time of the issue to be the vehicle in which a battle could take place.

We see in the first paragraph Cathy starting to cross the First Threshold, it’s the first time we see her in conflict with the Villain, it’s at this moment where she decides shes had enough of her circumstance and feels a inner call to make a change. This feeling continues to build for her till she encounters Sima in the bathroom, I would say this becomes a turning point for her, not necessarily taking her in a new direction but escalating the call to do something. The story from this point starts to move with some serious momentum and pushes it towards the climax point.    

You never really know exactly what part (if any) Wordswood plays in Sima’s ordeal but I felt not to label it too much rather leave it to the reader to interpret how they saw. For me it mirrored the injustice around the broken welfare system, people were suffering but those responsible seemed to be hard to pin point, and therefore change seemed to be distant and seemingly unreachable.


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